vox nihili

Nope. You're close, though. It does have to do with the sink. Try to come up with motive. That's the slipperiest thing in this story.

Thanks for the input, guys! There's plenty more where this came from. I think the following chapters will be a bit more unusual. I built this around a premise of ...

It's wonderful that he has something to help! I know even the "mild" tics can be very difficult to cope with. That is, when people make a big deal out ...

Thanks for the review! I wasn't sure about the dialogue at the beginning, but I'm glad you like it. I'll try to clarify some about the transitions between the objects ...

This was refreshing! Finally a bunny who isn't so cuddly. I have an idea for a title if you are so inclined to change it... An Ungrateful Bunny

That format is way easier to read! I can read it now, and interpet it. First: this should be rated at least PG 13 due to the sexual references. So ...

Thanks for the review! I added a little bit more emotion... Hope it holds up. ; ) I don't generally do tragedies...well, I do irony, but not as much tragedy. ...

Thanks for the feedback! ;) I've edited it a little.

Thanks for the feedback! I could use some work.

Everybody else has said what I want to say...but wow. I love this one. So cool, so good. ;) Cheers. --Voxina

Uh...you're lacking emotion. Serial killers are passionate and secretive people. Go to and type in serial killers. They have an awesome article on the subject. Do the research-it'll pay off.

Wow. That was good. I just have to wonder: what was his past? This guy's past? Did he do something to get him commited to an institution, or are the ...

One of the groom's so-much-es needs to be put in italics. Other than that, it's a great, almost immaculate poem. So keep writing! I will let my readers go-- Cheers! ...

sorry.

I will just second what everybody else said and slink off into cyberworld...... Yells: *I second their claims!* So that's my crit...sorry I wasn't more original, but they already said ...